Hateness

Thrgow the anger
and throgw the pain
inside the litle cyrkel
of suffer
I am trapt
inside those gates

In my blood
and in my brain
inside my shell
of notthingness
I have gaind
my thoght´s

Whith my Hate
and whith my pain
I am judge too suffer
for this long lasting
Time

hjalti

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