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The ever-lingering presence

The ever-lingering presence
touches my fingertips
Underneath the dizziness
I feel it shiver on my lips
Like a cloud that sunk too low
it covers me in moisture
In a dream I spin with you
in the kindest gesture

Freed from all concern
rebuild the bridges that I have burned
In a dream I spin with you
hanglide in the water
Freed from all concern
dismiss all I've been made to learn
In a dream I spin with you
and wake up later

The ever-lingering comfort
engulfs me with its embrace
Feel completely peaceful
so easy now to calm my pace
Like a cloud that sunk to low
she covers me in kindness
In a dream I spin with you
in the end is happiness
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